42
abre-se uma porta
outra se fecha
o ciclo continua
...
esta a
essência do medo
impávida
ausente
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42
one door opens
another closes
the cycle continues
...
this is the
essence of fear
undaunted
absent
Saturday, July 29, 2023
Alberto Estima de Oliveira — O Diálogo do Silêncio / The Dialogue of Silence 42
Alberto Estima de Oliveira — O Diálogo do Silêncio / The Dialogue of Silence 41
41
no rosto
da janela
chove
embaciando
meus olhos
com seu hálito
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40
on the face
of the window
it's raining
fogging up
my eyes
with its breath
Friday, July 28, 2023
Alberto Estima de Oliveira — O Diálogo do Silêncio / The Dialogue of Silence 40
This one was (and still is) very tricky to translate, and as usual with poems like these, I'm not very happy with how it came out. Two things tripped me up: the use of articles in the lines beginning with "a sombra", and those lines in general. The articles here can read as both possessive and directional, which works great in Portuguese but not really in English; and there's a sort of mirroring going on in those lines, where the middle two ("contrastes/da janela") act as the focal point for the two above and below. Maybe I'm misunderstanding that, but that's how I tried to render it. Finally, Estima de Oliveira is doing something by contrasting parts of a window, and I think I get it, but I'm currently incapable of explaining what exactly he's going for.
DAS
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40
mirante: janela exposta
no recorte
dos destroços
a flor
no vaso
...
janela
o pórtico
das estrelas
cortina
pano de boca
do proscénio
interior
a sombra
dos caixilhos
contrastes
da janela
as grades
a penumbra.
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40
viewpoint: exposed window
framed against
the rubble
a flower
in a vase
...
a window
portico
of the stars
drapery
the stage curtain
of the inner
proscenium
the shadow
of the sash
the window's
contrasts
the grills
twilight.
Saturday, July 08, 2023
Alberto Estima de Oliveira — O Diálogo do Silêncio / The Dialogue of Silence 39
39
o sol
nasce dos teus olhos
nas manhãs
de agosto
como as primeiras flores
da primavera
lá colho o mel
que gosto
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39
the sun
rises from your eyes
on august
mornings
like the first flowers
of spring
there i gather the honey
that i like