For such short poems, these are hard to translate. I'm not very happy with my last two translations.
I almost left "lorcha" in the English version, because it's not necessarily clear that "junk" refers to the kind of Chinese ship. Now you know.
6
sob a lorcha
deslizam lágrimas
caminhos da foz
páginas
líquidas
de rocha.
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6
tears slip
beneath the junk
on their way to the estuary
liquid
pages
of stone
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